Tuesday, April 5, 2011

N+π: The Raven

When we first mentioned constrained poetry in class, my thoughts immediately jumped to the poem "Near A Raven," Mike Keith's takeoff on Poe's "The Raven."

"Near A Raven" begins thus:

            Poe, E.
      Near a Raven


Midnights so dreary, tired and weary.
Silently pondering volumes extolling all by-now obsolete lore.
During my rather long nap - the weirdest tap!
An ominous vibrating sound disturbing my chamber's antedoor.
"This", I whispered quietly, "I ignore".

Perfectly, the intellect remembers: the ghostly fires, a glittering ember.
Inflamed by lightning's outbursts, windows cast penumbras upon this floor.
Sorrowful, as one mistreated, unhappy thoughts I heeded:
That inimitable lesson in elegance - Lenore -
Is delighting, exciting...nevermore.

Keith has imposed a purely mathematical constraint based on the number of letters in each word. Beginning with "Poe, E." and continuing throughout the poem's 740 words, each one represents a digit or two of pi. One through nine letters indicate the digits 1 to 9, ten letters indicate a 0, and eleven or more letters represent two consecutive digits (usually 11 or 12).

3 comments:

  1. Fascinating! Thanks for sharing this brilliant variation on Poe.

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  2. That's cool that he could actually use math in the poetry and make it make sense. My N+7 poem turned out to be gibberish (with slightly violent undertones).
    I can actually see this as a legitimate way to make a reference to another piece of literature while playing around with it extensively. At least in his work it was evident that a great amount of work by the poet the second poet went into the creation of the work.

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  3. This is crazy cool! I love how it still has the basic feeling of the original and even some of the theme of the original in it, too. And such a unique idea! Wow!
    Thanks so much for sharing this! It's awesome!

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